Tuesday, July 2, 2024

scene 7

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EXT. HUNTER'S HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER 

One of several handsome homes widely spaced along a street in the high desert community of Talavera east of Las Cruces near the base of the Organ Mountains. Open garage shows the newish Range Rover SUV and oldish Honda Goldwing motorcycle. A green bin is next to a blue bin near the mailbox.  Tom's truck approaches from down the road.


INT. TOM'S TRUCK   

Tom in aviator sunglasses nears Hunter's house, slows and stops at the driveway. He gets phone from cup holder, raises it to to take a picture of the house just as Hunter enters garage through door to house, bag in hand. He looks up, sees Tom, Tom takes picture, puts phone in cup holder, holds Hunter's stare for a moment, then drives on up the road.


INT. GARAGE/EXT. DRIVEWAY

Hunter walks to the bin, eyes all the while on Tom's truck. 


INT. TOM'S TRUCK

He keeps his eyes on HUNTER IN THE REARVIEW MIRROR as he nears a street and house around its corner.


EXT. DRIVEWAY

Hunter watches the truck make the turn, obscured by the house. He drops the bag into the blue bin, waits for the truck to reappear, walks back to the garage when it does not, enters house, closes door behind him. 


INT. TOM'S TRUCK

Tom parked and idling on the street ouitside the house that obscured him from Hunter's view. After a moment of contemplation, he makes the U-turn back onto Hunter's street and drives toward his house. 

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