Thursday, September 19, 2024

final beats 1 - 11

Sort, shuffle, repeat. 


1. INT. BDRM - N

Tom and Wanda in pajamas in bed. Tom reading Foglost, Wanda perusing Hawaiian travel brochure. Wanda re luau, Tom "when in Rome" and surfing lesson. Wanda's pay to see it. Won't have to and umbrella, toes in sand and mai tai. Wanda re hula lesson. Tom re getting lei'd. Lamps off, bed springs squeak.


2. EXT. HOUSE/DRIVEWAY - D

The truck, WY plates. Tom leaving, scenic route, call every hour. A neighbor. Wind chimes.


3. INT. TRUCK - D

Tom driving, music on radio, enter Colorado.  


4. EXT. LARAMIE RIVER TRAIL - D

Wanda with Daisy gets selfie from Tom


5. INT. MOTEL ROOM - SUNSET

Tom's KNOCKING before he enters. Monsoon clouds, ABQ skyline and Sandia Mountains. Calls Wanda and Ruth, STARTS BATH.


6. EXT. YUCCA SOMETHING MOTEL - SUNRISE

Cars and trucks in the puddled lot. Tom out from room to truck and away.


7. INT/EXT TRUCK - D

Tom driving, Hunter's neighborhood, Organ Mountains. GPS directions, Tom makes the turn.


8. INT. HOME OFFICE - D

Hunter writing, window to Organ Mountains. Chloe photos. 


9. INT. KITCHEN - MOMENT LATER

Enter Hunter, the routine, he leaves. 


10. EXT. HUNTER'S HOUSE - MOMENT LATER

Garage open. Tom approaches, stops, stares, aims phone to take picture as Hunter comes out from garage door to house. Tom drives away. Hunter watches him disappear behind neighbor's house, puts bag in bin, back to house. 


11. INT TRUCK - MOMENTS LATER

Tom idling and pondering. The U-turn.  

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