Friday, July 12, 2024

scene 17 in progress

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EXT HOUSE/DRIVEWAY - DAY

Barb arrive home, driving Volvo wagon. Cerro shows SLO.

PHONE CHIRP. A selfie Chloe has sent, including Tom and Hunter. 

She stares before finally SENDING it to MOMDAD.


INT. JAN AND JOHN'S HOUSE - SUNSET

Upscale rural Paso Robles. Red wine with the selfie Barb has forwarded.

JOHN: It's probably coincidental that he arrives two days after Foglost comes out.

JAN: That crossed my mind.

JOHN: He's handsome. Isn't he.

JAN: He is. Kind eyes.

JOHN: Yes. A little sad, too?

JAN: A little. Have you ever owned a pair of cowboy boots.

JOHN: Roy Rogers with trigger embroidered on the side, for Christmas.

JAN: Well had I not asked. How old were you?

JOHN: Shit, what, five or six? Santa Claus put them under the tree next to the empty plate on which Gwen and I left him cookies and a cup of milk.

JAN: Aw. Do you remember what Gwen got?

JOHN: Tricycle. Pink, with a basket on the handlebars. Have you ever set foot in a pair of cowgirl boots?

JAN: With Gloria and Madeleine when we were in Denver for the reunion.

JOHN: Obviously you didn't buy them.

JAN: I did not. I felt a little wobbly. Then again we walked in wobbly after an extended brunch. To the degree that I temporarily forgot the promise I had made to Chloe about not buying leather.

JOHN: I have a feeling Tom might know a thing or two about the cattle industry. 

JAN: I reckon we'll know a thing or two more about Tom Walker from Texas when Barb calls.

JOHN: And right after Brian's sudden and surprising arrival.

JAN: When it rains.

JOHN: We're going to need a bigger umbrella.


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18. EXT. HUNTER'S PATIO - NIGHT

RAINING. Hunter, Chloe and Tom around the table, post-dinner, remnants on plates pushed to center.

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