Tuesday, October 15, 2024

Scene 1 Final

INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT

TOM and WANDA, mid-70s, sit up in bed, under the covers, in pajamas, reading. Both wear glasses. Curtains closed across the window above the headboard. Lamp, eyeglass case and phone on their respective nightstands. Wanda peruses a Hawaiian Travel brochure. Tom is reading a grey hardcover book we can see is titled Foglost and written by H.C. Hardyn. His wedding band is gold, her diamond-on-silver modest.

WANDA: Should we do a luau?

TOM: Well, what is it they say about when you're in Rome?

WANDA: Do as the Romans do.

TOM: Heck, I'm halfway thinkin' about takin' a surfin' lesson.

WANDA: Now that's some halfway thinking alright.

TOM: You think this ol' dog ain't got one more trick in him?

WANDA: I'd pay to see it.

TOM: Won't have to. Got 'em down the beach from our hotel. You just pull up under an umbrella with your Mai Tai, stick your toes in the sand and watch me hang ten.

Pause. Tom turns a page.

WANDA: Hmm. Maybe I'll take a hula lesson.

TOM: You know I'll be front and center for that.

Wanda does a hula dance move with her arms and hands. Tom smiles.  

TOM (cont.): So whaddaya reckon the chances are we'll get lei'd.

Wanda, shocked, sets down the brochure, stares at Tom, who finally looks at her.

WANDA: Thomas Travis Walker, my goodness gracious.

TOM: What? Ain't that what they call them flower necklaces they put around your neck when ya get off the plane. A lei?

She shakes her head.

WANDA: Yes, that's what they're called. But I'm not sure our airline does that.

TOM: Oh.

She returns her attention to the brochure, Tom his to the book.

WANDA: However I feel there's a good chance we will when we get to our hotel.

Tom looks at her, closes book. She looks at him, winks. He smiles. She puts brochure on her nightstand, Tom sets the book on his. Each reaches for and turns off their lamp at the same time.

BEDSPRING SQUEAK IN BLACK.  

the perfect title

 

it isn't Boots and it isn't Honda Knot but it will come to during the timeout i'll commence now to let this gestate before beginning Finally Final blog, perhaps as Untitled. Almost there after so long.     


Hilary Barrett:

"This is about natural beauty, like the beauty of a plant, whose form is the perfect, simple expression of its nature. It's also about the way people create images to communicate something of a person's or thing's inner nature."

Act 3: beats 39 - 76/Epilogue

39. Hunter's dream.

40. Kitchen, coffee, Tom reveal, tells Chloe.

41. Wanda with Daisy gets Hunter's call.

42. Ruth gets Wanda's call.

43. Gil with Maria gets Ruth's call.

44. Hunter and Chloe watch coroner truck drive away.

45. Barbara, John, Jan, Brian on golf course. Barb gets Hunter's call. "Chloe's coming home."

46. Jackie gets Hunter's call.

47. Hunter and Chloe.

48. Wanda and Daisy, Laramie airport.

49. Gil and Ruth.

50. Doc gets Hunter's call.

51. Chloe, Barbara, Jan, John driving. Hunter's itinerary re Kerrville.

52. Gil, Ruth, Wanda.

53. Night. Hunter and Jackie in bed.

54. Next day. Hunter leaving in the truck. Sunglasses.

55. Brian with his dad, son, re meeting Hunter re - surprise - marrying Barbara.

56. Wanda and Ruth, Hunter arrive.

57. Chloe, Barbara, Ruth, John, boat, Lake Nacimiento. What do we know about Ruth? Chloe ties a Honda knot.

58. Gil with Maria re "tomorrow." 

59. Night. Wanda, Ruth, Hunter, table talk, Paso Robles wine.

60. Chloe in her room watching Tom video gets call from Hunter in Ruth's guest room. .

61. Next day. Ruth, Wanda, Hunter driving. Re Gil, arrive Mendoza gate.

62. Gil on deck. Truck engine, arrive. Maria and the boys watch intros through window.

63. Fort Park. Hill Country mesa view. Hunter, Gil, the boys, ATV's. Family history, the land re G.I. Bill, his father and uncles. World War 2, Vietnam, his photos. Lunch call.

64. Maria, Wanda and Ruth in the kitchen. The ATV's. 

65. John and Jan re when in Austin.

66. Night. Wanda, Ruth, Hunter, rai, thunder, Ruth's peach ice cream, Hunter's backstory.

67. Gil in den,. Bangkok selfies. 

68. Next day. Hunter leaves in truck.

69. Hunter driving. Flat. Glove compartment. Manual, registration and insurance, WY and TX fishing licenses.

70. Barbara and Chloe. 

71.  Flat fixed.  Assistance. "My father's last truck."

72. Hunter's guest room. Enter Hunter with boots and hat. The guest book.

73. Doc. Re Hawaii.

74. Leaving Laramie.

75. Hawaii.

76. Chloe birthday truck.

CREDITS OVER Hunter and Gil FISHING.