Friday, December 6, 2024

John and Jan: Found Them

EXT. RURAL RESIDENTIAL ROAD - DAY

Oak-shaded two-lane lined by widely spaced handsome homes on big lots surrounded by rolling hills. John and Jan in uphill power-walk mode past the driveway to a California Ranch style home, Running shoes, khaki shorts, polo shirts with sweat-stained collars and armpits. Both with five-pound dumbbells in each hand. Jan's ensemble complements her Cal-Berkeley ballcap, John's does the same for his Stanford cap. Their labored breathing reflects their purposeful pace. Finally:

JOHN: I found them. Travis did the trick.

JAN: What trick?

JOHN: Street view to the gated entrance of their mobile home park. 

JAN: Really?

Cottonwood Creek Mobile Estates, a few blocks away from the Laramie River. A feed store down the road in one direction, another park in the other. Grey sky and patches of snow on the ground. 

JAN: When did you find this?

JOHN: When you were on the phone with Karen.

JAN: Oh. 

JOHN: Do we know if Steve found his dog?

JAN: He did. Well, a golfer on the sixteenth fairway at River Oaks did.

JOHN: Maybe that'll move him to reconsider his leash policy.

JAN: Considering Karen says he's having him chipped, perhaps so. 

A lull.

JAN (cont.) Have you ever been to Laramie?

JOHN: Cheyenne U-S-D-C for Big Coal versus E-P-A my second year at Buford Sawyer. Six days in late January, below zero every one of them. You?    

JAN: Closest was Fort Collins for a cousin's wedding when I was seventeen.  

A lull. 

JAN (cont.): Any other Travis tricks.

JOHN: Yes. A link I'll click soon as we get back.

JAN: Do we know what the link links to?

JOHN:  An ancestry site.

Jan stops, stopping John.

JOHN (cont.) Thomas Travis Walker in bold.  Maybe there's more than one. 

Jan's PHONE CHIRPS, she stops, John stops, she gets it from pocket, stares at screen. 

JOHN (cont.) Cue drumroll.

JAN: Barb forwarding a picture Chloe took.

She hands him the phone, John stares at the selfie Chloe has taken that includes Hunter, Jackie, Tom and Chloe at bunched together, smiling back at Chloe's camera-on-stick, the Chihuahuan Desert and rolling hills of The Tularosa Basin behind them. 

JOHN: I've been there.

JAN: Where's there?

JOHN: San Augustin Pass pullover on seventy just before White Sands. That's the Tularosa Basin behind them.

JAN: Why and when were you there?

JOHN: Dad was looking at land in the Cloudcroft area. I turned eleven the week before. We flew to El Paso and rented a jeep. 

JAN: We including mom and sis?

JOHN: Mom and sis were in Palm Springs with aunt Betty.

JAN: So the Cloudcroft land.

JOHN: Beautiful. Six acres of pines on the side of a hill. He had the plans and architect for the four-bedroom A-frame. It was that or Park City. He flipped a silver dollar at dinner one night, heads. Park City. Though mom would have gone along happily with Cloudcroft, as did dad with Park City, her happierness about Park City winning, so to speak, was palpable. As was barely dad's less happier. Which I never again sensed. Park City obviously worked out and, since this has come up, we need to get back later to talking about selling.

JAN: Okay. 

JOHN: But now how about we get to that ancestry link. 

JAN: Double time.

JOHN: Go.

They continue their march around the bend, out of view. 

Patio Talk final form

EXT. HUNTER'S PATIO - NIGHT

Hunter, Chloe and Tom around the table, post-dinner, plates pushed to center. 

CHLOE: How did you and Wanda meet?

TOM: Post office in Boise, Idaho.

HUNTER: What were you doing in Boise?

TOM: Foreman on a ranch in the area.

CHLOE: What kind of ranch.

TOM: Cattle, mostly. 

HUNTER: Retired?

TOM: Yessir. Comin' up on nine years.

CHLOE: What was Wanda doing in Boise?

TOM: Workin' at the post office. Took me three times comin' in to pick up my mail before I found the nerve to ask if she'd be interested in goin' to the rodeo. Turned out she was goin' anyway, with a girlfriend, so we met up there, ended up talkin', got married a year to the day later.

CHLOE: Plans for your twentieth?

TOM: Goin' to Hawaii.

CHLOE: Cool. Which island?

TOM: Oahu. Stayin' the first few nights in Waikiki, the last few in a place called Kailua. 

CHLOE: Have you been before?

TOM: First time for both of us. Y'all probly been.

Chloe nods.

HUNTER: Looking forward to it?

TOM: We are. Not so much about the flyin' part but ain't much of a way around it. 

THUNDER.

CHLOE: Here it is.

HUNTER: Did you get some monsoon season in Albuquerque last night?

TOM: Sure did. Put me right to sleep. Speakin' a which, and I sure hate to be party-pooper, but I hope y'all'll excuse to call my wife and sister as it's a little past our bedtime and I know they're both waitin' on my call.

HUNTER: Of course, Tom. 

Tom pushes chair back, stands.

TOM: Chloe, I sure would appreciate it if ya'd share the recipe for that casserole, 'cause it sure was delicious.

CHLOE: Of course, Tom. Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

HUNTER: I'm right here with coffee for sunrise, so if you're up, please join me.

TOM: I'm an early riser myself, and I sure will, thank you. Thank you both for your generous hospitality.

CHLOE: Thanks for stopping by.

Tom nods.

TOM: My pleasure, Chloe. Hunter. Goodnight y'all.

HUNTER/CHLOE: Goodnight, Tom.

They watch him walk to, enter the kitchen, leave view into hall. The first DROPS OF RAIN fall. NEARER THUNDER.

HUNTER: If.

CHLOE: If.

HUNTER: If Tom is able and willing -

CHLOE: Uh huh.

HUNTER: And Jackie's cousin is able and willing to wrangle another horse -

CHLOE: Yes.

HUNTER: Yes?

CHLOE: Yes. I think that would be cool.

A moment before Hunter gets phone from pocket, speaks into it.

HUNTER: Jack.

Hey there.

Sitting right next to me on the patio.

We're looking forward to it and in fact that's why I'm calling. 


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EXT. HUNTER'S DRIVEWAY - DAY]