Hunter Ranch, Paso Robles. Jan and Barbara in one cart, John and Brian in the other. John inquires re John's father and son. Son segue into baseball and where he might play after Cuesta. Segue into Chloe, softball and her visit with Hunter to Tucson re UA. Jan and Barbara re same, segue into Hunter's consideration of moving from Las Cruces re wherever Chloe decides to go to school. Hunter ringtone.
Sunday, April 6, 2025
Barbara 1
Photographer and teaches a class at Cal Paly SLO. Met Hunter at the newspaper they worked at. Swim team at UC Santa Barbara. Surfs with Chloe.
Brian
Residential architect with an office in San Luis Obispo. We meet his father and son at a Cuesta College baseball practice. We meet his older Porsche 911 when he is driving with Barabara, who gives him the background on Tom and Olivia.
John and Jan: locations and backstory.
1. In the Mercedes G on the way to the airport with Barbara and Chloe, day.
2. Later, with Barbara at winery, Hunter's call re Tom. Chloe will call later, John re getting Tom's middle name.
3. Next day, power-walk in their affluent rural Paso Robles neighborhood. John, via Tom's middle name Travis, has found where Tom and Wanda live. Exchange re decades-previous coal litigation in Cheyenne. The Jag in the driveway. Barbara's forwarded Chloe and Tom selfie.
4. Later, at home, sunset, Barb's forwarded -from-Chloe White Sands sunset.
5. Next day, playing golf with Barbara and Brian. Hunter's call re Tom.
6. Later, with Barbara and Chloe re Hunter's itinerary.
7. Next day, with Barb, Jan and John on boat, Lake Nacimiento, re Ruth's story.
8. Months later. Chloe's birthday truck.
Retired attorneys. John an environmental litigator, Jan personal law and estate management, practiced in San Francisco, raised Barbara in Mill Valley. On their uphill power-walk John sports his Stanford cap, Jan's her Berkeley Bear. We meet their new Mercedes G-wagon taking Chloe to the airport, and the old BMW in the driveway when they finish their power-walk.
scene 1 relocation
Yes to:
EXT. OVERLAND TRAIL MARKEY HWY. TURNOUT WEST OF LARAMIE, WY - SUNSET
Previous everything else re Foglost, Hawaii, dialogue remains per previous.
Reading glasses removal and out with the lights replaced by Tom starting, U-turn on highway.
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