Tuesday, February 11, 2025

scene 16 dialogue

scene 15

INT./EXT.  TBD - PASO ROBLES, CA - DAY

JAN: And we were worried about Brian.

JOHN: And we were wrong, weren't we?

JAN: We were. Seems we'll be meeting his father and son soon.

JOHN: Seems so. Seems we'll be meeting Hunter's father, too. 

JAN: Seems so. He'll add to what Chloe knows about Olivia.

JOHN: Hopefully. Maybe a story about the selfie.

JAN: Oh my. I had forgotten that. 

JOHN: Hunter might have half-siblings.

JAN: And Chloe cousins.

JOHN: Another limb on her family tree.

JAN: Thus ours.

JOHN: Thus ours.  This is a good thing, Jan.

JAN: I know.

He puts arm around her, she reciprocates.

this pause, talkinamyself

it's because i understand the story enough to realize i am not locked into previous iterations, but that the late changes i will make are the ones i'm committing to, re submitting it.

and besides, after this long, what's a little more time.

fish on, closer to boat.