Monday, January 27, 2025

scene 10

scene 9

EXT. PATIO/BACK YARD - DAY

A handsome bungalow's shaded patio, chairs, grill and wall-mounted TV.  Hanging seashell chime. Two chaise lounges at the kidney pool, all fenced and privatized by trees and plants. Hose on spool, gardening supplies and tools arranged near a wooden gate on a side of the house. Sliding glass door to house behind JOHN and JAN, mid-70s, playing scrabble at the table with BARBARA, 50ish. Barbara and Jan survey their tiles and the board in similar style, eyes darting and chin propped on hand.  John arranges his tiles in search of a word. 

He's in loafers that match the belt that holds up his khaki slacks. Argyle socks that complement his polo shirt. Handsome watch and gold wedding band. Jan, scorekeeper with pen and legal pad, in new jeans, leather ankle-high boots, light cardigan over denim blouse. Her slender silver watch draws the eye to the shiny diamond on her wedding ring. Barbara in fashionable track suit and running shoes. Each with phone and glass of white wine at hand. John stops his tile activity.

JOHN: Bingo.

JAN: Uh oh.

John uses all seven tiles to lay down the word "NIBLICK," using the N to make "NAUGHT" of "AUGHT."

BARBARA: Ouch. 

JOHN: A cursory count comes up seventy-four but feel free to double-check.  

He reaches into the tile bag, adds seven to fill his tray.

BARBARA: Speaking of niblick.-

JAN: Seventy-four confirmed and the lead regained. Sorry, sweetheart. Speaking of niblick.

Jan records the score on the legal pad.,

BARBARA: Speaking of niblick, Brian pulled the trigger on that titanium driver.

JOHN: Oh boy. Has he used it yet?

BARBARA: No, Saving it for the fourth tee.

John smiles, nods.

JAN: Do we know if his son made the baseball decision yet?

BARBARA: We do. He's going to play a year at Cuesta and go from there.

JOHN: I suspect Brian doesn't mind he's staying home.

BARBARA: He's happy about it. 

Jan adds four of her tiles to niblick's k to make the word "QUICK" placing the Q on a "triple-letter" space.

JOHN: How long have you had that Q.

JAN: Awhile. Got the U last draw. Forty.

Barbara's PHONE RINGTONES a FOGHORN. 

BARBARA: Hunter.

JOHN/JAN: Foglost.

Barbara nods, picks up. Jan gets four new tiles from the bag, places them in tray. 

BARBARA: Hey there. 

(Her face expresses confused surprise.)

Wow. Well, Hunter, I entirely trust your sense of this.

They're right here.

Okay.

I'll be waiting.

(She puts phone down, looks to John and Jan.)

JOHN/JAN: Well?

BARBARA: Tom Walker is at Hunter's house.

JOHN: That Tom Walker?

BARBARA: Yes. He's spending the night.

JAN: Does Chloe know?

BARBARA: Not yet. She'll call tonight.

Silence. Finally:

JOHN: We need a middle name.

BARBARA: Check.  

A BREEZE RATTLES THE SEASHELL CHIME.

scene 9 part 2

scene 9 part 1

EXT. HUNTER'S FRONT PORCH - MOMENT LATER

Tom, hat on, stands at the door, truck parked on the street near the bins. Hunter opens the door slowly and slightly, surveys Tom and the truck.

HUNTER: Can I help you?

TOM: Howdy, sir. My name is Tom Walker.

Hunter surveys Tom and truck parked on the street near the bins.

HUNTER: Tom Walker from Texas who was in Reno, Nevada, about this time fifty-one years ago?

TOM: Yessir. One of 'em anyway. I was there the evenin' a the eleventh through the afternoon a the fourteenth of July.

HUNTER: Doing what, if you don't mind me asking?

TOM: You can ask me anything ya want. I was passin' through on my way to Mexico from the end of a job near Fallon, Nevada.

HUNTER: What kind of job?

TOM: I'd round it off to ranch hand.

HUNTER: What was in Mexico?

TOM: A little vacation.

HUNTER: What was my mother's name?

TOM: Well, Marilyn was her first name but she went by her middle name Olivia. If I got the right Hunter Hardyn.

HUNTER: How did you find my address?

TOM: Paid a few bucks for an online search.

HUNTER: What if I didn't know who you are?

TOM: I'da been turned around and askin' for directions back to Drippin' Springs Road.

HUNTER: Just happen to be in the neighborhood?

TOM: Sorta. On my way to Texas.

HUNTER: From where?

TOM: Where I live in Laramie, Wyomin'.

HUNTER: I'm off to El Paso to pick up my daughter at the airport.

TOM: Yessir.

HUNTER: You'll be back through on your way home?

TOM: Yessir. In a week.

HUNTER: We won't be here in a week.

TOM: Yessir.  

Hunter opens the door wider, gestures for Tom to enter. Tom takes off hat, enters, leaves view. Hunter stares at the truck, finally closes the door.