Saturday, March 15, 2025

Brian and Dad dialogue 1

Location

DAD: Golf tomorrow, right?

BRIAN: Yep.

DAD: You probably told me where you're playing. 

BRIAN: Hunter Ranch.

DAD: Right, you did. What do you know about John’s game?

BRIAN:Eight handicap, 

DAD: Damn.

BRIAN; Jan is usually around ninety.

BRIAN: They play twice a week.

DAD: At Hunter?

BRIAN: River Oaks, not far from where they live. Ready to meet them?

DAD: Are they ready to meet me, Brian?

BRIAN: Yes. They’re alright, dad. 

DAD: I’m sure they are just by Barbara.

Brian smiles at dad and throws his arm over his shoulder.

DAD (CONT.): Gonna keep her?

BRIAN: If she’ll let me. Ready?

DAD: Ready. 

They finish their ciders, drop the cups into a nearby bin, stand - Dad with assistance of his cane - and walk to the parking lot, Dad with a slight limp.

DAD: Chloe impressed.

BRIAN: Chloe’s impressive.

It’s clear they’re walking to the Porsche. 


To be continued.

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